Wednesday, 31 March 2010

Final task:- Audience feedback

Good titles

i dont get the whole baby bit but i like the titles and the wall building by what looks like on its own.

Very well lit

gets quite repetitive after a while but amazing titles!!!

I like the way the titles flicker like the title of the film suggests. I'm not sure about the background on the titles though.

nice story, for you never know what's going on. Nice titles.


I love the titles!



In general, I agree with these comments and I agree that the titles are probably the strongest part of the sequence. When watching our piece, I have noticed that sometimes the building up of the bricks does get a bit repetitive but on the other hand, I think this is necessary in order to reinforce the metaphor of isolation. I do like the feel of disorientation that we have created through quick changes from shot to shot although I do agree that at certain points it can be a little too confusing (like with the baby)

Despite our flaws, overall I am happy with our final result. It is well filmed and edited and I like the fact that we have a real story behind the sequence, making it meaningful. We also leave a great deal to the viewer's imagination, rather than just spoon-feeding our audience.

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